Writing good speech dialogue is very difficult when it’s not being spoken. You need to use words and phrases that can be quickly read and understood, but also sounds natural and flows. Each character must have their own personality, and seem cat-like since that’s what they are. Cat people.
And I write very mechanically sometimes. I’ve asked a few of my friends who are more skilled at writing, but had no luck. I guess I’ll have to sit down and think through all of this.
If this game doesn’t get finish, it’s because I’m stuck on dialogue.
I don’t can English well, even when I do.